Thought on Rough Draft #4

I decided to go with the death sentence topic. Obviously the essay needs to be longer; I always seem to have trouble with this. I plan on expanding my ideas on refuting the counterarguments. Also, I need several more topics in my essay, which will ultimately lengthen it. 


Space Curiosities

Scientists have found an immense pool of water just floating out there in the cosmos. This massive reservoir of floating  water vapor is in fact the largest collection of water in the universe that we know of. The mass of the cloud-like water vapor is 100,000 times larger than the sun; holding 140 trillion times more water than all of the oceans on Earth.

Response to Journal Entry Question p.506

Judy Brady’s description of a wife is one who sacrifices their time and well being for their spouse and their children. There wife puts the needs and desires far before his or her own (since the gender of the wife is never described; giving the sense that the wife could be a male). I can’t say that every characteristic of a wife according to Brady is still there, nor can I say that some of the characteristics completely disappeared. Some wives stay at home, while others have their own job despite the significant other having one already. I know that wives still take care of their children, while others have the husband do it.  However, the one characteristic Brady wants her wife to do which I am not to sure about is wanting a wife who will type [Brady’s] papers for [her] when [she] has written them.” I have never heard of a wife that does this, but if there are, I would definitely want a wife who would do that for me.

Topic for Essay #4

So far, I have no topic I will definitely use for this last essay, but I have narrowed it down to three. The three possible topics for this argumentative essay are abortions, the death penalty, and immigration laws. I’m leaning more toward the abortions or death penalty topics since I have more knowledge about them. However, I am still unsure at this point.