Thoughts on Rough Draft Essay #3

In all honesty, my rough draft is not where I want it to be. I feel I need to revise the whole thing. To start, it definitely needs to be longer. I plan on expanding on my ideas if I can, and I might add some new ones as well. My paragraphs are not completely organized, and some hold several criteria about the advertisement when they are supposed to only hold one. I’ll try to separate those criteria maybe expand on that. Also, I might expand more on the idea of why there is no text on the ad, as well as include a counterargument paragraph.  


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